Sending criminals to prison is not the effective method to deal with them.Education and job training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
罪犯应该如何处置？题目中给出了两种方案：sending them to prison和education and job training。应该选哪一种呢？题目中有个关键词instead, 即选择education and job training， 也就是这两种方案，题目中的观点只选了第二种，而放弃了关进监狱这种方案，原因是收监是not effective的方案。那么你同意还是不同意呢？一个杀人犯不用坐牢？我不同意！（当然犯罪不是只有murder，还有诸如theft， robbery，financial fraud等。）
Admittedly, some people may hold the view that schooling and vocation training is more effective than imprisonment to some extent in handling criminals because the latter cannot prevent them from recidivism while the former can make it. Once the crime-committers are released from the captivity, they are likely tocommit crimes again to revenge the society, but having been educated and trained professionally, they can be reformed mentally and employed stably, thus living a normal social life.
However, I think putting evil-doers behind bars is as effective as education and profession training, which means these two measures can be carried out at the same time. To begin with, sending villains into jail is a deterrent stopping them from becoming recidivists. Confined in the prison, they are deprived of personal freedom. For instance, they have to follow the daily schedule made by the police in charge about when to get up and sleep, and in order to go to the bathroom, they have to report to the jailer.
In addition, education and occupation training is beneficial for the reforming of prisoners. The authorities can cooperate with universities and training institutions to educate the prisoners and cultivate their working skills. For example, the police officers can invite someexperts in law and psychology to the jail to impart the concerned knowledge to help the evil-doers have a clear idea about their mental problems and the laws and regulations they have to follow as a social member, and under the supervision of policemen, the prisoners can alsoacquire skills like sewing, automotive maintenance or computer operation in the training centers.
在这篇文章中，作者比较贪心，两种方案都选了，但是如果只能选择其中一种呢，譬如，只选imprisonment，不选education and job training, 或者只选education and job training, 不选imprisonment，又该如何写作呢？感兴趣的同学可以练习一下哦。